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This poem is so moving and profound. It is like a mirror that reflects what we have lost in the process of pursuing glory, control and self-aggrandizement - "grace". It is a gift that does not need to be earned, unconditional, but is often forgotten by us. You use progressive language to make readers really ponder: What are we pursuing? Do we still remember the soft part of our hearts?

Your words remind me of a sentence: "The more we have, the easier it is to forget the simple happiness we once desired."

I wonder - what does "grace" mean to you? Have you ever experienced a moment that made you really stop and re-examine your pride and desire?

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